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An experience only happens once in my life
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Today,the topic is talking about an enperience only happens once in my life. That things happened in the Spring Festival in this year. My friend and I traveled to the other provinces during this period. Just the two of us. We arrived in Kunming on Spring Festival's eve. It was the first time that I had not been with my family on Spring Festival's eve, and it was the first time the I had not had a reunion dinner with my family. When the night falls, there is hardly anyone on the streets of Kunming. My friend and I back to the hotel with lots of KFC. Unfortunately, the hotel's TV just broke, it was the first time that I didn't watch the Spring Festival's gala on time, but aslo the first time I'm really miss my family which the loneliest Spring Festival's eve in my life. It was on that day, I was deeply aware of the importance of family for me.
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about my little dog
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The little dog names GUAIGUAI , he is a boy , and he don't have girlfriend now. He is three years old. He like playing dolls with me and he like to bite my dolls from my bed . So my dolls always adhesive his saliva.For all that,i still love him so much .I will travel with GUAIGUAI in this Spring Festival, we will go to DALI and have a nice experience .
26 décembre 2016
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