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In the present age , information communicating tool is playing a significant role in our daily life..but in the meantime,what are the merits and demerits in these devices and which is the most effective has sparked much debate..for my part, I will introduce 3 sorts of ways to receive the information and hold my own view below.
First, reading brings us everything. it is clear that book is a approach to acquire knowledge .moreover it ease individuals’ mind and boarden people’s horizon,especially ,the article,which concern about philosophy and literature can deepen our thought. However ,the disadvantage of book is that the paper just give us monotonous words without the vivid animation.
Second,the radio,which is use for receiving the signal ranging from tv show to news or to any others,is prevalent in former period .thus .it probably used by the majority of the aged and there are little information concerned .nevertheless,the low price also attract people to come to buy.
Finally ,and the most effective way I insist is that the tv set,obviously ,compare with the two former ways I mentioned,it more visual and convenient ,specifically,we can know the lastest news about the world .for instance , individuals is going to out with a umbrella since the tv weather report has been broadcasted. In addition,recreational programme almost bring us enjoyment and pleasure
In summary I would concede that tv set may bring some violent and pornographic imagination so that cause the increasingly rate of crime .despite that, I also tend to the television to my information sourse.overall, I am convinced that the television should be the most effective tool in this morden times
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i am very like english ;)
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