Hi! can anyone check my verse? does it have right to be? You are sitting in silence in front of me Not smoking, but pretending rather. You are my old and good enemy, And my consanguineous brother. Like Bosporus that binds two seas Istanbulian night has bound Two separate hearts to be With each other forever around. Was it a Byzantine Gods’ agreement Or just a blind fate’s drift? May be I am your cruel punishment, May be an incredible gift. So close and so far from me Are your deep and brown eyes. -Do you live on European? -Yes. -But me - on Asian side.