Please correct my composition: Some Risks that I Have Taken
I remember there is a risk I have taken. I was really afraid of crossing the drawbridge, but if I didn't go through it, I wouldn't enjoy the beautiful scenery and the great trip. It was really a big decision that I didn't know whether I could let the whole trip be perfect or not.
When I was about 15, my parents brought us to Ku-Kuan, and it was a family trip. It was an extremely good chance for my family to relax and also to improve our relationships. We seldom hung out all together to other cities, so it was an extraordinary experience.
After visiting some great tourist spots there, the sky got darker and darker, so we decided to go to the hotel that we had booked. While heading for the hotel we are going to stay, I found that we had to cross the drawbridge to get to it, and also, we had to visit other spots at the other side of the bridge the next day. At the moment I saw the drawbridge, I almost wanted to ask my parents to go back home that night. Considering the whole trip, I plucked up my courage and stepped on the drawbridge, grabbing my dad's arm, trembling. They all knew that crossing the drawbridge was a big challenge for me, so they tried to encourage me, and also said that it was really nothing. I was really afraid of the height of it, and I didn't thing that drawbridge was a safe thing for us to walk through because we might fall, and there were also a lot of people shaking it or jumping on it on purpose. I finally got through it and had a nice trip with my dear family.
Thinking back, I was pretty glad that I didn't ask my parents to go back home at that time, or we might waste the money we paid for the hotel, and also miss those great hot springs.