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I'm sure, there are some mistakes in my text. But I can't get where I did it.
"You must remember as a fact, you can do anything you want. But.. hopes may broke. Now you should to think that we are not all-powerful.. And, if you really still want it, just keep firmly your first belief. You know what, it's easy to die, it's hard to stay alive. Never fall. Never."
For example, I don't know how I should write this phrase correctly: "hopes may broke". 'Cuz I didn't mean that The hopes may break Something, but exactly like.. "It happens.. hopes may be broken." So..maybe this way would be correct?
Plus some other mistakes maybe?
Thanks a lot))
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I wrote a little poem. Is it correct?
I wrote a little poem. Is it correct?
Remember me I used to be,
That way you liked I am…
Forget all that you shouldn’t see
But I’m not angel, what’s the Eden?
I will be perfect in your dreams
But in the real I’m still myself,
With all my faults, with all my freaks,
If can you take me after that?
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Hello! Am I right? I was trying to translate a poem from Russian.
Easier to groan that you are beaten, - and to die,
Easier to fall back and give up.
But to fight, to fight when
It seems there's left no hope,
That is the worthy of praise!
Although you've gone out of the terrible battle,
Wounded, destroyed, and scarred,
Try again. Easy to die,
Hard to stay alive.
(And here is an original of that poem in Russian language.. Just in case:
Легче простонать, что ты побит, - и умереть,
Легче отступить и пресмыкаться.
Но сражаться, сражаться тогда,
Когда уже не видно надежды,
Вот это - завидный удел!
И хотя ты вышел из страшной схватки
Разбитый, израненный, покрытый рубцами,
Попытайся ещё раз. Умереть легко,
Трудно оставаться в живых.)
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