Is correct this paragraph? Thank in advance

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"IT Professional with more than 15 years of experience in the Software Industry.
Teamwork and good interpersonal relationships. Dynamic, proactive, competent and highly adaptable.
Experience in requirements engineering, software project management, processes, testing and finTech. Knowledge of the Banking, Financial / Investment, Telecommunications, Transportation, Education and Medical Industry. Passionate about finance and blockchain technology. "
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Is correct this paragraph? Thank in advance

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"IT Professional with more than 15 years of experience in the Software Industry.
Teamwork and good interpersonal relationships. Dynamic, proactive, competent and highly adaptable.
Experience in requirements engineering, software project management, processes, testing and finTech. Knowledge of the Banking, Financial / Investment, Telecommunications, Transportation, Education and Medical Industry. Passionate about finance and blockchain technology. "
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It looks good, I've made a few small changes below:

"IT Professional with more than 15 years of experience in the Software Industry.
Teamwork and strong interpersonal skills. Dynamic, proactive, competent and highly adaptable.
Experience with requirements engineering, software project management, processes, testing and FinTech. Knowledge of the Banking, Financial / Investment, Telecommunications, Transportation, Education and Medical industries. Passionate about finance and blockchain technology. "

I think it would be best to not use the word "proactive", it is a bit of a cliche in English.

I think it would be a good idea to mention some of the processes you have used before.

Instead of listing all of your industries, I think it would be better to say something like "Experience in a variety of industries, including..." and list the top three or four that are most relevant.

Good luck :)

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All good

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Can you help me with my englesh please