Aditi
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Well, i dont know if i have done it yet, though they say they're proud of me for what all i have done so far and am currently doing in my life. There was a phase in my life when I didn’t fully see everything my parents were doing for me. But as I’ve grown older, I’ve realised and can see the their sacrifices and emotional strength they gave me without ever saying a word. Especially my mom… she believed in me even when I didn’t believe in myself. She gave up her own comforts for my needs and wants. She’s given me so much love, support, and strength—often in ways I didn’t understand at the time. I’m working hard not just to grow in my life, but to build a life where they can finally rest and feel cared for—where the weight they’ve carried for years slowly begins to lift. Even though I know I haven’t done enough yet, I try every day. I know we can never truly repay our parents — not for the sleepless nights, the compromises, or the dreams they silently gave up—but we can try. And I’m trying.
2025年4月17日 22:43
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Well, I don’t know if I have done enough yet, though they say they’re proud of me for everything I have accomplished so far and what I am currently doing in my life. There was a phase in my life when I didn’t fully appreciate everything my parents were doing for me. But as I’ve grown older, I’ve realized the sacrifices and emotional strength they provided without ever saying a word. Especially my mom… she believed in me even when I didn’t believe in myself. She gave up her own comforts for my needs and wants. She has given me so much love, support, and strength—often in ways I didn’t understand at the time. I’m working hard not just to grow in my life, but to build a life where they can finally rest and feel cared for—where the weight they’ve carried for years slowly begins to lift. Even though I know I haven’t done enough yet, I try every day. I understand that we can never truly repay our parents—not for the sleepless nights, the compromises, or the dreams they silently gave up—but we can try. And I’m trying.
Hi Aditi! You did a remarkable job expressing your feelings about your parents and their sacrifices. I really appreciated how you highlighted your mother's belief in you, even when you struggled with self-doubt. Your determination to create a better life for them is truly inspiring. To improve, consider simplifying some sentences for better clarity. Keep up the great effort!
2025年4月20日 22:39
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