The Tim じぁん!!!
Today is Sunday, weather is sunny, and we all had slept in this morning, nothing could compare with to sleep in for a wonderful weekend. And today is also Father’s Day so we have decided to be lazy, just relax and do nothing. My sister has sent her greeting to my dad from NewZealand, I miss her, but I’d rather give him a big fat hug. The phrase for today is “sleep in”, happiness is simple, I feel happy when I had sleep in.
2021年6月20日 05:13
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Today is Sunday, the weather is sunny and we all slept this morning, nothing can compare with sleeping in for a wonderful weekend. And today it's also Father’s Day so we have decided to do nothing, just relax. My sister has sent her greetings to my dad from New Zealand, I miss her, but I’d rather give him a big fat hug. The phrase for today is “sleep in”, happiness is simple, I feel happy when I sleep in.
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2021年6月20日
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Today is Sunday, it’s sunny and we all slept in this morning. There is nothing to compare with sleeping in for a wonderful weekend, today is also Father’s Day so we have decided to be lazy, just relax and do nothing. My sister sent a greeting to my dad from NewZealand, I miss him but I’d rather give him a big fat hug. The phrase for today is;“sleep in”, happiness is simple, I feel happy when I have had a sleep in.
Sleep in is better known in England as a lay in. There was some confusion over who you are missing. You put it as “,I miss her,” as you have written it it would have been correct if you were missing your sister but that didn’t match with the whole sentence because you went on to say that you wanted to give him “your father” a hug.
2021年6月20日
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Today is Sunday, The weather is sunny, and we all woke up well rested this morning, nothing could compare to a good sleep during a wonderful weekend. And today is also Father’s Day so i have decided to be lazy, relax and do nothing. My sister has sent her greeting to my dad from New Zealand. I miss her, and would love to give her a big fat hug. The phrases for today are “sleep in”, happiness is simple, I feel happy when I sleep in.
2021年6月20日
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