Yamaguchi Sho
【Task 2 question Globalization】 Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? [Agree] ◎Prioritizing Profits and Growth while Neglecting Environmental and Social Considerations. On the one hand, critics argue that the expansion of multinational companies often leads to increased environmental degradation since these companies tend to prioritize profits and growth rather than environmental and social considerations. These companies exploit the resources without adequate consideration for sustainability, and lax regulation exacerbates this issue. ◎Carbon emissions and environmental pollution Additionally, increased carbon emissions and air pollution are the unavoidable negative effects of globalization. The increased transportation of goods and people across borders contributes to high emissions and environmental pollution. [Disagree] ◎There are certain global standards On the other hand, there are certain global standards, in particular, in environmental and social safeguards. In general, international companies have to follow these rules and regulations. In today’s world, reliable mechanisms have been established to ensure the sustainability of environmental consideration and resource utilization. ◎globalization brings about increased awareness and collaboration Moreover, globalization brings about increased awareness and collaboration on global environmental issues. International companies are more likely to be exposed to diverse environmental regulations and standards. This exposure may lead to the adaptation of the best practices from different regions, contributing to a more comprehensive and global approach to environmental protection. [In conclusion] ◎The expansion of globalization and multinational corporations unavoidably leads to some negative impacts on the environment.
2024年2月3日 05:06
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Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? [Agree] ◎Prioritizing Profits and Growth while Neglecting Environmental and Social Considerations. On the one hand, critics argue that the expansion in the number of multinational companies often leads to increased environmental degradation since these companies tend to prioritize profits and growth rather than environmental and social considerations. These companies exploit resources without adequate consideration for sustainability, and lax regulation exacerbates this issue. ◎Carbon emissions and environmental pollution Additionally, increased carbon emissions and air pollution are the unavoidable negative effects of globalization. The increased transportation of goods and people across borders contributes to high emissions and environmental pollution. [Disagree] ◎There are certain global standards On the other hand, there are certain global standards such as environmental and social safeguards. In general, international companies have to follow these rules and regulations. In today’s world, reliable mechanisms have been established to ensure the sustainability of environmental consideration and resource utilization. (This is waffle) ◎globalization can bring about increased awareness and collaboration Moreover, globalization brings about increased awareness and collaboration on global environmental issues. This is because international companies are more likely to be exposed to diverse environmental regulations and standards. This exposure may lead to the adaptation of the best practices from different regions, contributing to a more comprehensive and global approach to environmental protection. [In conclusion] ◎ Overall, I believe that while there are some protections, the expansion of globalization and multinational corporations unavoidably leads to some negative impacts on the environment.
In general this is good but it does waffle in places. You are throwing in words without putting them into a coherent argument. You need to give a clear opinion.
2024年2月3日
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