Shana
Nowadays, it is common that females keep their full-time jobs while running a family with their partners. Consequently, many people convince that both man and woman should share housework tasks equally during their marriage, and I wholeheartedly agree with this. Despite there are regulations from companies that offer special caring toward female employees, they are not fully covered in and implemented by most companies, especially in developing countries. For instance, woman can be granted maternity leaves and parental leaves, however, these leaves are still not enough. As long as there is a family needed to run, and children to bring up, certain amount of housework is inevitable for family members to complete. In this case, anyone in a family should bear the responsibility of taking care the housework, and an ideal solution to this is sharing housework loads in a detailed way. For one hand, couples in healthy relationship would help each other, chores from daily life in a family are reasonable to be taken from any of them, which I think is not about the gender issue. For the other hand, it is unfair for females to cover all housework when the fact is they keep their full-time job like their partners. The result to this constant unfair reality on women often lead to a unhealthy marriage easily, and is bad for social stability as well. In conclusion, I agree that male partners take care of some certain housework in their marriage, which is also a great way to show their caring to their partners, as well as a necessity for maintaining a healthy marriage. 266 words
2024年2月4日 17:04
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“Nowadays, it is common for females to hold full-time jobs while also managing the responsibilities of running a family with their partners. Consequently, many people are of the opinion that both men and women should share household tasks equally during their marriage, and I wholeheartedly agree with this. Despite the existence of regulations from companies that offer special assistance to female employees, these are not fully implemented by most companies, especially in developing countries. For example, women may be granted maternity and parental leave, but these leaves are often not sufficient. As long as there is a family to run and children to raise, a certain amount of housework is inevitable for family members to complete. In this case, responsibility for the household should be shared among all family members, and the ideal solution to this is to share household tasks in a detailed way. On one hand, couples in a healthy relationship would help each other, and it is reasonable for either partner to take on household chores, regardless of gender. On the other hand, it is unfair for women to bear the brunt of all household tasks when they are also working full-time jobs like their partners. The result of this constant unfairness towards women often leads to unhealthy marriages and is bad for social stability as well. In conclusion, I agree that male partners should take care of certain household tasks in their marriage, which is also a great way to show their care for their partners and is necessary for maintaining a healthy marriage. (word count: 265)”
ChatGPT has provided one for this, what do you think of it? I am not sure if my writing met the task's requirement this time... 🤣
2024年2月5日
Nowadays, it is common for females to have full-time jobs while raising a family with their partners. Consequently, many people are convinced that both men and women should share housework tasks equally during their marriages, and I wholeheartedly agree with this. Despite there being regulations on companies meaning that they must offer special care arrangements to female employees, they are not fully implemented by most companies, especially in developing countries. For instance, woman can be granted both maternity and parental leave, however, this leave is still not enough. As long as there is a family to look after and children to bring up, a certain amount of housework is inevitable. In this case, men should bear equal responsibility for taking care of the housework, and an ideal solution is for couples to share housework tasks in an agreed way. Couples in a healthy relationship would naturally help each other, it is reasonable for daily chores to be undertaken by either of them, which I do not think relates to gender. It is unfair for females to cover all housework when the fact is they maintain a full-time job like their partners. The result of this constant unfair situation on women often leads to a unhealthy marriage, and is bad for social stability. In conclusion, I agree that male partners should take care of an equal proportion of housework in their marriages, which is also a great way to show their care for their partners, as well as being a necessity for maintaining a healthy marriage. 266 words
Generally ok. As mentioned before, when talking generally use plurals.
2024年2月5日
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