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This year's winter was mild in its coldness. That was an advantage to the houses that contain gardens. I cheer up whenever I visit my family's house when I look at the colourful flowers. They glow with bright colours and add life to the house. In addition to the positive energy that emerge of it.
2024年2月25日 20:42
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Winter this year was mild/not very cold. This was good for houses with gardens. I feel more cheerful whenever I visit my family's house and look at the colourful flowers. They glow with bright colours and add life to the house. They also add to the positive energy that emerge from the house.
You hardly had any actual errors. I just tried to make it more natural.
2024年2月26日
This year's winter was mild, this is an advantage for the properties with gardens. I cheer up whenever I visit my family's house when I look at the colourful flowers. They glow with bright colours and add life to the house. This is in addition to the positive energy that emanates from it.
2024年2月26日
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