Molly
Because the weather is cold so, I will buy more blankets to sell. I will keep one for my family. I like the blankets I sell so much that I am excited to use a new blanket with new pattern. Every year, I take one for my family.
2022年12月14日 00:02
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Because the weather is so cold, I will buy more blankets to sell and keep one for my family. I like the blankets I sell so much that I am excited to use / to get a new blanket with new pattern. I actually keep one blanket for my family each year.
2022年12月14日
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Because the weather is cold so, I will buy more blankets to sell. I will keep one for my family. I like the blankets I sell so much that I am excited to use (to get? to receive?) a new blanket each year with a new pattern.
I am not sure if use is the right word here, although it is grammatically correct. The last sentence seems repetitive, so I would delete it. Hope that helps!
2022年12月14日
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