1-I’m 19 years old.
2-My sign is Capricorn.
3-I’m the youngest sibling in my family.
4-I’m that kind of person who always seeks success in life.
5- I have big dreams in life.
6-My major is psychology.
7-I only have 1 friend because I’m not really good in making new friends and socializing.
8-the cars of my dreams are Mercedes G-class and and Audi A6 or above.
9-I’m always curious what the future is holding for me.
10-I’m a really optimistic person and I put high expectations about everything in my life and I think this is a bad thing because if things didn’t work the way you expected you would be really disappointed so being balanced is what I’m trying to achieve.
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1-I’m 19 years old. 2-My star sign is Capricorn. 3-I’m the youngest in my
family. 4-I’m that kind of person who always seeks success in life. 5- I have
big dreams in life. 6-My major is psychology. 7-I only have one friend because I’m
not really good in making new friends and socializing. 8-the cars of my dreams
are Mercedes G-class and and Audi A6 or above. 9-I’m always curious what the
future holds for me. 10-I’m a really optimistic person and I have high
expectations about everything in my life and I think this is a bad thing because
if things didn’t work the way you expected you would be really disappointed, so
being balanced is what I’m trying to achieve.
Only a few minor corrections. You use the passive at the end, which is the sign of quite sophisticated knowledge of English.
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