Fanny Herrera Segovia
Hy guys ! I'm trying to improve my English for two reason. The most important is that I want to make a change and find a better job, and my second reason is that I'm so shy when I have to speak with someone in English.
2020年10月10日 07:08
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Hey guys ! I'm trying to improve my English for two reasons. The most important one is that I want to make a change and find a better job, and my second reason is that I'm really shy when I have to speak with someone in English.
Good job! I only changed "so" to "really" to make it sound more natural. 😊
2020年10月10日
Hy guys ! I'm trying to improve my English for two reason. The most important is that I want to make a change and find a better job, and my second reason is that I'm so shy when I have to speak with someone in English.
I see no reason for any changes here. This is very well written. Good job!
2020年10月10日
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