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Daniela Mauro
Hello, this is my first question :)
Does this coffee description sound natural/correct?
A subtle coffee blend of the finest Arabica beans from Brazil, Colombia, and Ethiopia that brings to the cup a beverage of extraordinary sweetness, with fine floral and citrus acidity and warm notes of milk chocolate, hazelnuts, and toasted bread.
thanks!
2023年10月31日 14:53
回答 · 4
I'm confused by "floral acidity". Throw in an extra noun to go with floral - something like "floral hints and citrus acidity". Actually, I don't like "acidity". "Acidity" is not a pleasant taste. Perhaps just "floral and citrus hints".
instead of "the cup", say "your cup"
"hazelnut" instead of "hazelnuts"
2023年11月1日
It sounds great, Daniela, but I think I would prefer "...produces..." instead of "...brings to the cup...".
2023年11月1日
招待者
Yes Daniela,
This description is very creative and correct.
Best regards,
Maria
2023年10月31日
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