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Mehedi Hasan
Every country has its respective interesting facts so does my country. Our country has a lot of interesting facts and here is some of them.
First of all, we are very religious. Every single person in our country believes in maker. We are very friendly as well. We always share our happiness and sorrows with everyone and take care of one another in time of need.
In our country, people are too fond of food. Most people like to eat spicy food. When it's about eating food people of our country don't judge whether the food is hygienic or unhygienic they just judge the test of the foods.
Another fact about our country is we love travelling. Since our country has many tourists spots so we can go on an excursion whenever we want.
2021年9月7日 19:41
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Every country has its respective interesting facts, and my country does too. Our country has a lot of interesting facts. Here are some of them.
First of all, we are very religious. Every single person in our country believes in the Maker (or "the Creator"). We are very friendly as well. We always share our happiness and sorrow with everyone and take care of one another in times of need.
In our country, people are too fond of food. Most people like to eat spicy food. When it has to do with eating food, people from our country don't think about whether the food is sanitary or unsanitary, they just think about the taste of the food.
Another fact about our country is we love travelling. Since our country has many tourists spots, we can take a trip whenever we want.
I like your description of your country :)
2021年9月7日
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Every country has it's respective interesting facts so does my country. Our
country has a lot of interesting facts. Here are some of them.
First of all, we are very religious. Every single person in our country believes in the maker. We
are very friendly as well. We always share our happiness and sorrows with
everyone and take care of one another in times of need. In our country, people
are too fond of food. Most people like to eat spicy food. When it's about eating
food people of our country don't judge whether the food is hygienic or
unhygienic, they just judge the test of food. Another fact about our country
is we love travelling. Since our country has many tourists spots, we can go on
an excursion whenever we want.
Very nice job on this piece of writing! I highlighted some minor errors (for example, the word food is never pluralized) Apart from that, you communicated your points quite effectively.
Keep it up!
2021年9月7日
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Every country has its respective interesting facts so does my country. Our
country has a lot of interesting facts and here are some of them. First of all,
we are very religious. Every single person (it is impossible to say this, you can't know what everyone thinks. You could say 'The vast majority of people in our country believe that there is a maker/God') in our country believes in maker. We
are very friendly as well. We always share our happiness and sorrows with
everyone and take care of one another in time of need. In our country, people
are very fond of food. Most people like to eat spicy food. When it comes too eating
food, people of our country don't judge whether the food is hygienic or
unhygienic they just judge the taste of the food. Another fact about our country
is that we love travelling. Since our country has many tourists spots so we can go on
an excursion whenever we want.
Well done. If you are ever writing essays, avoid making generalisations.
2021年9月7日
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