Katerina
Sugar can be really dangerous and harmful to our health. There are a lots of reasons why and here's only some of them : 1) Over consumption of sugar can cause an obeisance and heart diseases , increase risks of dying and diminish brain and physical activities. 2) Eating too much sugar can influence on taste receptors. Sugar has a very strong taste and after eating too much of it, usual food will become less vivid. 3) Sugar and drugs activate the same parts of brain. It means that it can be very addictive and after one sweet you'll definitely disare more and more and more. It is hard to refuse.
2021年10月2日 14:20
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Sugar can be really dangerous and harmful for our health. There are a lots of reasons why and here's a few of them : 1) Too much intake of sugar can cause obesity and heart illness, increase risk of death and diminish mental and physical activities. 2) Eating too much sugar can influence our taste receptors. Sugar has a very strong taste and after eating too much of it, usual food will become less tasty. 3) Sugar and drugs activate the same parts of the brain. That means that it can be very addictive and after one sweet you'll definitely desire to have more. It is hard to say no.
2021年10月2日
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Sugar can be really dangerous and harmful to our health. There are a lots of reasons why and here are just a few of them : 1) Over consumption of sugar can contribute to the development of obesity and even raise the risk of heart diseases. There is also an increased risk of dying through diminished brain and physical activities, (for which I will set you the task of looking up the disease names since you introduced the idea! 😁 ). 2) Sugar influences our taste receptors. Since sugar has a very strong taste, after eating too much of it, less strongly-flavoured foods can 'seem' even less flavoursome: It can overpower the taste receptors and lead us to to feel that foods without sugar are bland. 3) Sugar and some types of drugs activate the same parts of brain, releasing chemicals that give us feelings of euphoria. Since euphoria is so wonderful for us to experience, this means that we can become very addicted to the feelings which sugar causes to be released in our brains. After one sweet you'll often desire more and more and more. It can be is hard to stop. Similarly, sugar in our diet generally can be difficult to reduce which leads to some of the problems I have mentioned.
'here's just a few' or 'here are just some'. It's all about plurals. and speech patterns. If you want to redraft, I'll have another crack at it.
2021年10月2日
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Sugar can be really dangerous and harmful to our health. There are a lots of reasons why and here's just a few of them : 1) Over consumption of sugar can cause an obeisance and heart diseases , increased risks of dying and diminish mental and physical activities. 2) Eating too much sugar can influence on taste receptors. Sugar has a very strong taste and when you take it more than enough usual food will become less vivid. 3) Sugar and drugs activate the same parts of brain. It means that it can make addiction and after one sweet you'll definitely desire more and more.It's hard to give it up.
2021年10月2日
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