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I have found a strange phenomenon that we get wiser as we get older. Some things we have done during our puberty look very stupid nowadays. We really regret doing these things which wasted the most important time in our life. So, when we see children or teenagers are making the same mistakes we have made at the same age, we are concerned about their future. In fact, we don't become smart or wise as we get old. We have just learned a lot of lessons from our past life. These mistakes we have made before really hurt ourselves later. They taught us that doing anything has a consequence. It can be positive or negative which definitelly depends on the purposes. So, when we get old, we always ask ourselves why we didn't listen to our parents or the other elders' advice. Why we made the important decisions in our life without thinking about more about the future? We just spend the whole life growing up.
2025年9月10日 07:44
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I have noticed a strange phenomenon that we seem to get wiser as we get older. Some things we did during our teenage years look very stupid now. We really regret doing these things because they wasted some of the most important time in our lives. So, when we see children or teenagers making the same mistakes we made at the same age, we become concerned about their future.
In fact, we do not automatically become smart or wise as we get older. We have just learned many lessons from our past. The mistakes we made before really hurt us later. They taught us that everything we do has consequences. Those consequences can be positive or negative, depending on the purpose.
As we grow older, we often ask ourselves why we did not listen to our parents or other elders’ advice. Why did we make such important decisions in our lives without thinking more carefully about the future? In the end, we spend our whole lives growing up.
The question is asking you to think about the special knowledge or wisdom that older people can give us. Some things we can easily find in books, such as facts, history, or science. But elders can teach us things that books cannot. For example, elders can share: Life experience and personal stories. Lessons they learned from mistakes. Advice about family, relationships, or daily life. Cultural traditions and values that are not written down. So the question is really asking: What kind of knowledge comes only from talking to older people, not from reading?
2025年9月12日 02:30
I find it strange that we get wiser as we get older. There are a few things we did during our puberty that look very stupid nowadays. We really regret doing these things which wasted the most important time of our life. So, when we see children or teenagers making the same mistakes we made at the same age, we are concerned about their future. In fact, we don't become smart or wise as we get old, we just learned a lot of lessons from the past. These mistakes we have made before really hurt us later. They taught us that everything we do has consequences which can be positive or negative depending on the purpose. So, when we get old, we always ask ourselves why we didn't listen to our parents or other elders' advice. Why did we make important decisions in our life without thinking more about the future? We just spend our whole life growing up.
2025年9月10日 10:19
I have noticed a strange phenomenon in that we get wiser as we get older. Some things
we did during puberty look very stupid nowadays. We really regret
doing these things which wasted the most important time in our life. So, when we
see children or teenagers making the same mistakes we made at the same
age, we are concerned about their future. In fact, we don't become smart or wise
as we get old. We have just learned a lot of lessons from our past life. These
mistakes we have made before really hurt ourselves later. They taught us that
doing anything has a consequence. It can be positive or negative which
definitely depends on the purposes. So, when we get old, we always ask
ourselves why we didn't listen to our parents or the other elders' advice. Why have we made important decisions in our life without thinking more about
the future? We just spend our whole life growing up.
Great job! You've expressed your opinion clearly. Next time, try including some more linking words like 'however, in addition, although' which will help your writing to flow. 😊
2025年9月10日 10:16
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