[1] "law" should be capitalized to "Law," since it's the title of a story or post. You technically can keep it as is, because more and more people do it that way, but the older and stricter grammar says you need to capitalize. [2] you have two options here: "[name of a specific TV or radio channel you heard the news from] news reported" or "There was a news report" [3] "they" is too vague. you need to say who made the arrest--the police, detectives.... [4] this should be "for trying," since "to kick squatters out of it" is describing/modifying the word "arrested" not "owner." [5] you have two options. option one, add "ing" to "occupy" (occupying) to focus on the person's action being done over a period of time. option two, you can focus on the idea and say "Imagine if someone were to occupy". [6] "with" should be "on a" . [7] using "disgraceful event" or "disturbing event" instead of "dramatic" would better show your feelings of dislike. also, since you're talking about something imaginary/not real, you would use "it would be" instead of "it's". hope my explaining helps :)

Agree with you.