Kasia
The most important thing is lack of phone. We shouldn’t use the phone before sleep. The light form phone has bad influence on our sight and our brain things that is day. We shouldn’t eat before sleep. The doctors recommend eat a few hours before sleep.
2022年11月3日 21:04
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The most important thing is controlling our phone usage. We shouldn’t use our phones before sleeping. The light from our phones has a bad influence on our sight, and our brain thinks that it is daytime. In addition, we shouldn’t eat before going to sleep. Doctors recommend eating a few hours before sleeping.
Good suggestions. Recently I have been reading a (paper) book before bed, that’s been helping me a lot.
2022年11月4日
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The most important thing is the lack of a phone. We shouldn’t use the phone before sleep. The light from the phone has a bad influence on our site and our brain thinks that is the day. We shouldn’t eat before sleep. The doctors recommend eating a few hours before sleep.
2022年11月4日
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The most important thing is lack of phone use. We shouldn’t use our phones before sleep. The light from phones has harmful effect on our sight and our brain things. We also shouldn’t eat before sleeping. The doctors recommend eating a few hours before sleeping.
Nice work Kasia, be careful about verb forms, ie. to eat vs. eat vs. eating. Keep it up!
2022年11月3日
もっと早く上達したいですか?
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