琳 Jolin
The girl who works as a camgirl wants to sue her company that owes wages. The pretty girl's name is Yu. She applied to the arbitral tribunal today. She said, her company deducted her salary for no reason and did not sign a labor contract with her. She added that she joined the company since March 2022, and the company had unfairly dismissed her without any reasons. So, she was very angry. I said, okay, the arbitral tribunal will accept your application and please wait for us to arrange a time for this case.
2022年6月20日 14:22
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A girl who works as a camera operator wants to sue her company for wages they owe her. The pretty girl's name is Yu. She applied to the arbitral tribunal today. She said her company made a deduction from her salary for no reason and did not sign a labor contract with her. She added that she joined the company in March 2022, and the company had unfairly dismissed her without any reason, so she was very angry. I told her that was okay, the arbitral tribunal would accept her application and to please wait for us to arrange a time for this case.
你好 Jolin. Notice in the last paragraph it is reported speech. Well done. Regards, Simon.
2022年6月27日
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The girl who works as a camgirl wants to sue her company because they owe wages. The pretty girl's name is Yu. She applied to the arbitral tribunal today. She said, her company made a deduction from her salary for no reason and did not sign a labor contract with her. She added that she joined the company in March 2022, and the company had unfairly dismissed her without any reasons. So, she was very angry. I said, okay, the arbitral tribunal will accept your application and please wait for us to arrange a time for this case.
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2022年6月20日
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