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Discipline   <o:p></o:p>

    It’s a fake word in my opinion, why I am say this words. I have some friends from military background, and they almost talk about discipline,although  when you concentrate on their characters you will see very bad characters, layers, deceitful, the most of them envy each other.<o:p></o:p>

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When I ask them about my opinion , they said , you are wrong because most  of us have a good molars, as ,courage, honest, forgiveness. Then they shut up me by a perfect words <o:p></o:p>

(Bad deed creates a bad common stereotype, but a good deed just keeps personal)<o:p></o:p>

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2018年5月20日 13:23
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I do not know what you did but I cannot correct you entry italki system is not allowing me to correct it. 

Discipline is not a fake word and if your friends are of a military background they would use that word far more than other people.

you would delve into their characters not concentrate

I think you mean they have manners, not molars (molars = teeth)

maybe other people will have better luck in correcting your text

2018年5月20日

  It’s a fake word in my opinion, why do I say this word. I have some friends from to military background, and they always talk about discipline, although when you delve their characters you will see very bad characters, layers, deceitful, the most of envy into each other.<o:p></o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

When I ask them about my opinion, they said, you are wrong because most of us have good manners, such as courage, honesty, forgiveness. Then they shut up me by a perfect words <o:p></o:p>

(Bad deed creates a bad common stereotype, but a good deed just keeps personal)<o:p></o:p>

     

2018年5月20日

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