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The Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge is the first road-rail bridge that designed by China and made in self-produced materials. The upper deck of the bridge is four-lane road bridge 4589 meters long while the lower deck is a double track rail bridge 6772 meters. The rail bridge connects the old Tianjing-Pukou Railway and Shanghai-Nanjing Railway, cut down the time for trains to cross the Yangtze river from one and a half hours in the past to 2 minutes in present. The bridge is not only an important transport hub, but also a famous scenic pot.
The completion of Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge marked a huge progress in China's bridge building. It greatly facilitates the exchange of goods and people between the two sides of the Yangtze River and plays a enormous role in developing the economy and enhancing people's lives.
2023年12月11日 07:15
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The Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge is the first road-rail bridge that was designed by
China and was made using self-produced materials. (It has two decks.) The upper deck of the bridge is a
four-lane road bridge 4589 meters long while the lower deck is a double track
rail bridge 6772 meters long. The rail bridge connects the old Tianjing-Pukou Railway
and Shanghai-Nanjing Railway. It cuts down the time for trains to cross the Yangtze
river from one and a half hours in the past to 2 minutes in the present. The bridge
is not only an important transport hub, but also a famous scenic spot. The
completion of Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge marked a huge progress(huge milestone) in China's
bridge building capability/industry. It greatly facilitates the exchange of goods and people between
the two sides of the Yangtze River. It plays an enormous role in developing the
economy and enhancing people's lives.
It's well written, very informative. Some suggestions in brackets. "Milestone" is a significant or important stage in the development of something. It works well here.
2023年12月12日
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