JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON March 15th
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me a more natural way of saying some of the things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECTED my entry). Here, I might write in spoken English, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also my speaking skills. Could you do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON March 15th
I have an anime I am <s>being </s>really into<s>,</s> these days. When I write down here the title of the anime, you <s>can</s> will be able to tell what I am really into now, because <s>the</s> people all over the world love<s>s</s> this kind of anime. Here, it is "Gundam". So what <s>did you hear</s> have you heard of this anime from your friend? Or do you feel it is really nostalgic? Yes, your feeling is just right because Gundam <s>is broadcasted firstly</s> was first broadcast on television in 1980.
You feel like this is something old, right? Yes, same here. However, my feeling I heard age turning to different <em>(sorry Taichi, this part doesn't quite make sense!) </em>when I begin watching Gundam. I <s>am</s> was afraid, I <s>am</s> was guessing that Gundam is a kind of anime just for <s>just</s> kids, but you can see in it sophisticated machines, not just one, but <s>also</s> lots. The story is, of course, not really <s>cheap</s> childlike, but rather <s>than that</s> really for adults, I think. I mean, it's a kind of military thing. So, that's why, once I started watching this anime, I ended up <s>to finish</s> watching all of <s>the</s> Gundam. <s>These</s> This story was really entertaining. If you are normally not interested in this kind of anime, I really recommend that you<s>, and you should </s>watch this, because <s>you are me earlier</s> I was like you before.
Good job Taichi! I understand almost everything! You have a good writing flow and you know how to use casual words and phrases as well as more formal ones. Just make sure to watch out for your verb tenses, and make sure that a verb is always accompanied by a subject (noun).
Message me if you would be interested in lessons. I specialize in grammar but am also available for conversation lessons :)