IELTS Preparation: Punish Children or Not
Topic: Some people think it is necessary to punish children in order to teach them the difference between right and wrong. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer. If you agree, what kind of punishment do you think should be given to children by parents and teachers? Give reasons for your answer.
I am inclining to agree with the fact that there are situations when children have to bear the burden of responsibilities for their actions. First of all, the threat of punishment gives children to think twice about the made up in their minds patterns of behavior whether the pattern is considered to be normal or deviant.
Secondly, punishment desciplines children's hard-to-control ego. Keeping in mind so called "stick" restricts a child from being irresponsible and violent towards his/her family, friends, neighbours and just occationally met people.
Thirdly, punishment partially plays the part in creating a concept of respect in children. To be able to respect something, you have to learn how to love something and keep it safe. Being so carefree, children tend to forget to keep the toys safe or to put away the clothes or make the bed. The reminding of punishment is the first signal in their heads to fix the situations.
In spite of positive effect of punishment, there are negative ones. Punishment is not the only and first means to teach children how to be a part of society. Side effect of the punishment can be low self-confidence in a child and consequently lack of motivation in studying, in having hobbies, in creating new games or activities. Children might be afraid of the punishment so much that it prevents them from making new friends, sharing their ideas and being themselves after all. I consider physical punishment and moral abuse are extremely unfavourable in any education. Mild types of punishment like reprimand, taking away some privileges, serious adult talks are good tools to sculpt a human being out of the raw clay.
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