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Why can't I do that? I couldn't send any messages tonight. Was it my fault? I am very very tired.I go to bed. Good night.((+_+))
2013年2月6日 15:02
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Why can't I do that?

I couldn't send any messages tonight.
Was it my fault?
I am very very tired. I'm going to bed.
Good night.((+_+))

 

You wrote this very well!

2013年2月6日

Why can't I do that?

I couldn't send any messages tonight.
Was it my fault?
I am very very tired.I go to bed.
Good night.((+_+))

 

Some thoughts if you do not mind.

You can also say:

(adding a comma with a time frame. With the comma they become conjoined thoughts)


I will go to bed, good night

I will go to bed, in a hour

I will go to bed, soon

I will go to bed, now

I will go to bed, when I am tired

I will go to bed immediately

 

2015年8月4日
Hello, apart from Anna's correction below, you may want to add a comma in between "very very" too. :) "I am very very tired." --> "I am very, very tired." You can also add a comma in between repeated words like "...really, really...". Hope this helps.
2019年1月23日
what 's wrong with it ,I'm new to this website .hope you will help me thanks.
2013年12月1日
もっと早く上達したいですか?
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