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My first driving lesson Last Tuesday I was having my first driving lesson. I drive with a 1er-BMW. The car is beautiful but also small. I was driving a other car in private before. The car before was a old Opel. Between the two cars is a big differenz. When I comparison them then the Opel was eaiser to drive. But I'm sure that I will have a lot of fun with the BMW if I was driving more with him. Tomorrow I will have my next driving lesson. Iam glad :) When I look outdoor I can say that the lesson tomorrow is the first in snow... Next days I work out a presentation about "The use of technology to control society". I think that is a interesting topic and I will find a lot of informations. I dont know whether it is possible to upload the presentation on italki. But this is something I work on the next days. Have a nice day! :)

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My first driving lesson

Last Tuesday I was having (had) my first driving lesson.
I drive with a 1er-BMW. The car is beautiful but also small.
I was driving a other (another) car in private before.
The car before was a old Opel. Between the two cars is a big differenz (difference) When I comparison (compare) them then the Opel was eaiser to drive. But I'm sure that I will have a lot of fun with the BMW if I was driving more with him.
Tomorrow I will have my next driving lesson. I am glad :)
When I look outdoor(s) I can say that the lesson tomorrow is the first in snow...

Next days (tomorrow?) I work out a presentation about "The use of technology to control society".

I think that is a interesting topic and I will find a lot of informations. I dont know whether it is possible to upload the presentation on italki.

But this is something I work on the next days.
Have a nice day! :)

It would be really cool if you could upload the presentation. A note to remember about english plurals, is that some nouns don't have s at the end of them to show that they're plural. :) It's all about rememebering which.

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My first driving lesson

Last Tuesday I had my first driving lesson. "was having" is the past continuous. We use this tense to talk about an action that was interrupted by another action. The past simple is more appropriate here.
I drove with a 1er-BMW. The car is beautiful but also small.
I had driven another car in private before.
The other car was an old Opel. There is a big difference between the two cars. When I comparison them then The Opel was eaiser to drive, but I'm sure that I will have a lot of fun with the BMW if I was drive it more.
Tomorrow I will have my next driving lesson. I am glad :)
When I look outside I can say that the lesson tomorrow will be the first in snow...

In the next few days I will work out a presentation about "The use of technology to control society."

I think that is an interesting topic and I will find a lot of information. "information' is uncountable. I dont know whether it is possible to upload the presentation on italki.

But this is something I will work on in the next few days.
Have a nice day! :)

 

We need to use the article "an" instead of "a" when the following word begins with a vowel. You made this mistake a couple times.

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