我覺得您的文筆越來越好 ，不過你好像在做網路相親 .... sorry , maybe that is my bias , but rather It is interesting.
Translating from your original :)
White rose 白色玫瑰花
Compared to red roses, I prefer the white ones roses.
比起红玫瑰，我个人更喜欢白色的玫瑰花。
When i pass flowers shop/florist, i always attracted by white rose.
每次经过花店，我都会北白玫瑰所吸引
Each time passing by a florist's shop, I am always drawn to white roses.
Although it isn't the most beautiful flower, however,I was particularly fond of it.
虽然它不是最好看的，但是我却对它情有独钟.
Although they are not the most beautiful looking, I am most partial to them.
Imagic oneday,i can receive white roses from my dailing.
幻想有一天，能收到亲爱的送的白玫瑰花。
I imagined that there will be a day when I can receive a white rose from my beloved.
Pure, and fresh, and delicate fragrance
纯洁清新，淡淡花香。
Not too bad.
