我翻译的pickup lines

有写pickup lines我成中文翻译了：

你的爸爸一定是一个偷香花使者， 因为他偷採下天上了星星和而放在把它们你的眼睛里.

当你从天堂落下凡， 有覺得什么你痛苦吗？

中国人文用有没有这个了样的鈎花詞呢？

Is your father a Casanova?  This is because he must have plucked down the stars from the sky to become your eyes.  When you descended to earth, did you feel any pain?  Do Chinese have this sort of pickup lines?

This is what I am guessing.  Need to provide the English next time to better accurate translation :)