Is there too much sports on TV?

There are people who think that there is too much sports programmes on TV. In this essay, I intend to analyse the arguments for and against sports on TV.

(You might be talking about a sport in particular, perhaps basketball or soccer. Sports in the plural, covering several different activities. For example, a sports channel.)

One of the strongest arguments in favour of sports on television is the fact that a lot of people enjoy these programmes. Besides, a lot of sports clubs earn a lot of money because of television. Last but not least, there are a lot of people who have a good job because of this.

On the other hand, this sort type of programmes do not promote a healthy lifestyle of life. For example, there are programmes who are sponsored by alcohol or junk food brands. Besides, these programmes cause problems in some families, because there are people who are in front of their TV all the day.

On balance, I am not in favour of too much sports on TV because it can create serious problems in some families, but there is not a problem if people learn when they have to turn on off the television.

(If they turn off the TV, then their addiction for sports decreases.)

Is there too much sport on TV?

There are people who think that there is too much many sports programmes on TV. In this essay, I intend to analyse the arguments for and against sport on TV.

One of the strongest arguments in favour of sport on television is the fact that a lot of people enjoy these programmes. Besides, many a lot of sport clubs earn a lot of money because of television. Last but not least, sport on TV creates many good jobs.there are a lot of people who have a good job because of this.

On the other hand, this sort these types of programmes do not promote a healthy lifestyle of life. For example, there are programmes who that are sponsored by alcohol or junk food brands. Besides, these programmes cause problems in some families, because there are people who are in front of their TV's all the day long.

On balance, I am not in favour of too much sport on TV because it can create serious problems in some families, but there is not a problem if people learn appreciate that there is a right and wrong timewhen they have to turn on the television.

Is there too much sport on TV? Are there too many Sports(1) on TV?

There are people who think that there is too much sports programmesing on TV. In this essay, I intend to analyse the arguments for and against sports on TV.

One of the strongest arguments in favour of sports on television is the fact that a lot of people enjoy these programmes. Besides(Also), a lot of sports clubs earn a lot of money because of television. Last but not least, there are a lot of people who have a good jobs because of this.

On the other hand, this sort of programmesing does not promote a healthy style of life(lifestyle). For example, there are programmes who that are sponsored by alcohol or junk food brands. Besides(As well), these programmes cause problems in some families, because there are people who are(remain) in front of their TV all the day(day long).

On balanceIn conclusion, I am not in favour of too so much sports on TV because it can create serious problems in some families, but there is not a problem if people learn (2) when they have to should turn on the television. 

Aureli - (1) I am from the US and we generally refer to Sport programming as Sports programming, just like we plural Math to be Maths.  If it is not normal to plural Sport where you live, then please ignore those corrections.  

(2) "...but there is not a problem if people learn when they should turn on the television."  I suggest "... but there is not a problem if people learn to limit the amount of television they watch."  I didn't know how to show this alternate choice without being too confusing. 

Very well done!!