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A berief self introduction 1 I was born and raised in a city called Jinan in East China. Ever since my birthday I had been spending my whole life there and never left the city till I was 6. Yes, six years straight. It was not easy for my grandparents, the greatest grandma and grandpa who took great care of me, to live with such a naughty and noisy kid and to help his parents relieve all kinds of burden for raising their child. Their hard life finally came to an end when I bid them good bye at the local train station. That day, our family moved to Beijing, the most massive city in the world. My life was a lot more blessed and easy than that of children living in orphanage, because I had my parents around. However, just because I lived with my parents doesn't mean I had a very happy childhood. They had to work hard to support our small family with only three family members in a strange place. Their life was all about work, food, and their child's grades. Besides these things, they cared about nothing. They took me to math and English tutorials, almost non-stop,every weekends, but I cannot think of a time when they offered to take me out for vacation. Every time I look back on my childhood, I feel sorry for that and feel as if everyone's life went more interesting than ours. (to be continued)
2014年6月4日 16:44
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A (berief) brief self introduction 1

I was born and raised in a city called Jinan in East China. Ever since my birthday I (had been spending) have spent my whole life there and never left the city (till) until I was 6. Yes, six years straight. It was not easy for my grandparents, the greatest grandma and grandpa who took great care of me, to live with such a naughty and noisy kid and to help his parents relieve all kinds of burden for raising their child. Their hard life finally came to an end when I bid them good bye at the local train station. That day, our family moved to Beijing, the most massive city in the world.
My life was a lot more blessed and easy than that of children living in orphanage, because I had my parents around. However, just because I lived with my parents doesn't mean I had a very happy childhood. They had to work hard to support our small family with only three family members in a strange place. Their life was all about work, food, and their child's grades. Besides these things, (they cared about nothing).  They didn't care about anything.They took me to math and English tutorials, almost non-stop,every weekend, but I cannot think of a time when they offered to take me (out) on a (for) vacation. Every time I look back on my childhood, I feel sorry (for) about that and feel as if everyone's life (went) was more interesting than ours. (to be continued)

2014年6月4日
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