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Heavy rain Hi there. There is a heavy rain outside. It's so wet. I don't like rainy day because I can't wear pretty clothes, high hill and I can't make nice hair style. When I approached company in the moring, I'm sweat. It's terrible. I want to finish this rainy day soon!
2014年7月24日 00:31
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Heavy rain

Hi there. There is a heavy rain It's raining hard outside. (or, "It's raining heavily") It's so wet.
I don't like rainy days because I can't wear pretty clothes, high heels and I can't make nice hair style wear my hair the way I want.
When I approached company got to work in the moring, I'm sweat I was sweating.
It's terrible.
I want to finish these rainy days to end soon!

 

I made these corrections to sound as natural as possible. About your hair style, you could also say "I can't have a nice hair style" but I think that sounds a little awkward.

2014年7月24日

Heavy rain

Hi, there. There is a heavy rain outside. It's so wet.
I don't like rainy days because I can't wear pretty clothes, high heels, and I can't make a nice hair style.
When I approached company in the morning, I'm sweaty.
It's terrible.
I want to finish this rainy day soon!

2014年7月24日
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