karina
Season My favorite Season is Summer , because in the Summer the peoples generally go to the beach, go to the clubs, go to the movies and etc.I don't like in the Winter , because is cold . In the Autumm the leaves the trees fall , the nature is sad. In the Spring the flowers are radiant. Come Spring!
2014年7月25日 11:02
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Season

My favorite season is summer, because in the summer the peoples generally go to the beach, go to the clubs, and go to the movies and etc.I don't like in the winter, because it's cold .
In the autumm the leaves fall from the trees fall , the nature is sad.
In the spring the flowers are radiant.
Come Hurry up spring!

2014年7月25日
Thanks
2014年7月25日

Hi Karina, I love your enthusiasm for life, and I hope you don't mind a few corrections. Of course, there are 100 different ways to write the same thing, so I have only corrected what you wrote and not rewritten the passage. Have a great day, Andi

 

Season

My favorite season is summer, because in summer people generally go to the beach, go to clubs, go to the movies, etc. I don't like winter because it is cold. 
In the autumm, the leaves from the trees fall and nature feels sad.
In the spring, flowers are radiant. 

Come spring!

2014年7月25日
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