Exhibition Pavilion To practice my english, I’m trying to describe a projetc wich I designed during my studies. For this exercice, we had to design a small exhibition pavilion on a parc of Marseille

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Exhibition Pavilion To practice my english, I’m trying to describe a projetc wich I designed during my studies. For this exercice, we had to design a small exhibition pavilion on a parc of Marseille city. This little project is take away from habitual paths. Think as a process , he is developed over tree stages to stage the discovering and reading of a book : - The invitation : a narrow corridor guide to the origin of light - The calm : a small exhibition room shows the book on a display front of a bench . The room is glazed all around. Rays of Sun across vegetation offer a diffuse ligth and a quiet atmosphere - The return : a narrow corridor go back to the parc and reality.

2014年7月27日 17:30

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Exhibition Pavilion

To practice my english, I’m trying to describe a project which I designed during my studies.
For this exercise, we had to design a small exhibition pavilion on a park of Marseille city.

This little project is taken away from habitual paths.
Think as a process , he is developing over tree stages to stage the discovering and reading of a book :
- The invitation : a narrow corridor guide to the origin of light
- The calm : a small exhibition room shows the book on a display front of a bench . The room is glazed all around. Rays of Sun across vegetation offer a diffuse light and a quiet atmosphere
- The return : a narrow corridor goes back to the park and reality.

2014年7月27日

Hi! thank you for your comment. I'll think about next time

2014年7月29日

Hi June, this sounds like quite an amazing project. I would like to hear more about it. It brings up so many questions. For instance; what were you studying? It sounds like architecture. I wonder what your idea would sound like if you started by saying something like I'm studying architecture in college. This gives me the opportunity to do many amazing projects. For example there was the small exhibition pavilion in a park in Marseille (and so on). Also, are there pictures of the project? Thank you, Ted

2014年7月29日

もっと早く上達したいですか？

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