My one day
My one day
Shanghai is currently in the height of its getting into a real summer. It's was very hot today. I stayed at home the whole day. I studied English for a half day and took a nap for one hour. When Whilst I was taking a nap, I was boiling a pot of water on the stove. So you can imagine that, when I got up, the water was had evaporated boiled away and the pot was dry. Luckily, nothing terrible worse thing happened. Now it's getting dark outside, I have to think about what I want for dinner. My refrigerator is empty. Maybe I should go to buy some vegetables and meat not only for dinner, but also for the rest of my meals in the next future three days. Besides, the weather is cold now due to the raining this afternoon. That sounds a good idea. So, I am leaving now. Thank you for your correction.
Good!
-When refers to a specific point in time whereas <em>whilst</em> (British) and <em>while </em>(American) refer to a dutation of time in the past
-When water boils away it has <em>evaporated</em>
-In English we think <em>about</em> things
-In the <em>next few days</em> or in the <em>coming days</em>.