FrenchLearnerA1
Help me with my English text, please. I lost the pleasure of enjoying many classics of literature, mainly because I could not read between the complex lines of social interactions. Some classic books are very realistic, reading them is the same thing as to see people interacting in the real world. It is very common in the real world for peopleto act motivated by interest in social or, and financial rise, or simply motivated by interest in sexual satisfaction. I rarely know what goes on between two people, do not know when they get along well, or only tolerate each other for irrelevant reasons; in my eyes, of course. In some classic books those happens too and I could never go beyond three pages of these books because my mind couldnt wonder why those people were doing what thy did. I always liked stories which ran the most noble aspects of the human mind and soul. I dont know how to describe how I felt when reading essays by Umberto Eco, and many others I'm revisiting now; or those amazing Transcendental poets. I often think I was always a person out of fashion, I was old even when I was a kid. Well, that´s all for now. If you want, you can share your thoughts about it. Thank you for your corrections, sugestions attention and time.
2014年8月23日 19:28
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Help Me with My English Text, Please.

 

I missed out on the pleasure of enjoying many classics of literature, mainly because I could not read between the complex lines of social interactions. Some classic books are very realistic. Reading them is the same thing as observing people interacting in the real world. It is very common in the real world for people to act motivated to be social,  or and financial rise for finacial gains, or simply for sexual satisfaction. I rarely know what goes on between two people and do not know when they are getting along well or are only tolerating each other for whatever reasons ; in my eyes, of course.


In some classic books, these complicated social interactions take place and I could never go beyond three pages of those books because my mind couldn't fathom why those people were acting like they were.


I have always liked stories which involved the most noble aspects of the human mind and soul. I don't know how to describe how I feel Use "feel" when speaking in general and how you still feel. Otherwise, use "felt" if you are talking about a specific point in the past. For instance, how you felt about them when you were in high school. when reading essays by Umberto Eco, and many others I'm revisiting now, or those amazing Transcendental poets. I often think I am way more mature for my age than most people; I was old even when I was a kid.


Well, that's all for now. If you want, you can share your thoughts about it.

Thank you for your corrections, sugestions, attention and time.

2014年8月23日
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