Michele Ank
A good friend My friends name is Sthefanie. She's a student. She's brazilian. She's nice, funny and beautiful. She has a sister. She's single. She has a lot of make up. Her parents are divorcided. Her mother lives in Rio de Janeiro and father lives in Além do Paraíba. Her favorite weekend activid is going to partys.
2014年9月27日 13:44
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A good friend

 

My friend's name is Sthefanie. She's a student. She's bBrazilian. She's nice, funny and beautiful. She has a sister. She's single. She has a lot of make up <em>[better to say make-up or makeup]</em> . Her parents are divorcided. Her mother lives in Rio de Janeiro and father lives in Além do Paraíba. Her favorite weekend activityd is going to partiesys.

 

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Nicely done!

2014年9月27日
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A good friend

My friend's name is Stephanie. She's a student. She's Brazilian. She's nice, funny and beautiful. She has a sister. She's single. She has a lot of make up. Her parents are divorced. Her mother lives in Rio de Janeiro and her father lives in Além do Paraíba. Her favorite weekend activity is going to parties.

2014年10月24日
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A good friend

My friends name is Sthefanie. She's a student who 's a single brazilian. She's nice, funny and beautiful. She has a lot of make up. She has a sister  but her parents are divorcided. Her mother lives in Rio de Janeiro and father lives in Além do Paraíba. Her favorite weekend activid is going to partys.

2014年9月27日
hi! im RJ in New York, USA. im happy to help you improve your spoken english. if you need help, please add me to QQ so we can chat and practice. My QQ: 1990992857 thanks and take care! --- RJ
2014年10月17日
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