Here is an entry which is similar to your style of Notebook entries:
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Today I woke up at 7am.
I brushed my teeth and showered.
I then had an omelete for breakfast.
I arrived at work at 9am.
I am a computer technician.
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A "paragraph" will collect all related sentences together. Here is the same entry, this time using paragraphs:
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Today I woke up at 7am. I brushed my teeth and showered. I then had an omelete for breakfast.
I arrived at work at 9am. I am a computer technician.
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The first three sentences form one paragraph, because they all talk about what you did at home. The last two sentences form a new paragraph, because they talk about a new topic: your work.
Now that we have collected sentences together as paragraphs, we can either introduce "conjunctions" or remove words to join some sentences together. For example:
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Today I woke up at 7am, brushed my teeth and showered. I then had an omelete for breakfast.
I arrived at work at 9am, where I am a computer technician.
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I hope this illustrates what is a "paragraph" in English writing.
A pair of cheap New Balance shoes
Just now, I bought a pair of New Balance sport shoes.
The price is was 299 CNY, almost equal to between 40 and 50 USD.
I found the shoes are made of 越南 in Vietnam. [1]
I think the shoes must not be the latest new style.
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[1] I think you should obtain a language translator. Generally you should not use a translator, and instead do your best to write your own English. You do this, which is great. But if you come to a word which you truly don't know, use a translator rather than writing the Chinese word.
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As I mentioned in another of your Notebook entries, I think you should learn about a "paragraph" in written English. Using paragraphs would make your writing much more natural.
A pair of cheap NewBalance shoes
Just now, I bought a pair of NewBalance sport shoes.
The price is 299 CNY, almost equal to about/approximately 40~50 USD.
I found the shoes are made in Vietnam of 越南(how to spell it in English).
I think the shoes must/are certainly not be the latest new style.
A pair of cheap New Balance shoes
I bought a pair of New Balance sport shoes just right now.
The price is 299 CNY, that is around 40~50 in USD.
And I found that the shoes are made in Vietnam.
But I guess the style is not the latest trend in the market.
A pair of cheap NewBalance shoes
Just now, I bought a pair of NewBalance sport shoes.