I'm moving to the USA!

Hi there! Today I want to talk you about the reason why I need to improve my English fast, and as the title says, it's because I'm moving to the United States to study. The journey isn't prepared yet, . I'm still thinking about the I think you mean 'which' city I want to go and what exactly will I study there., *But to sum it up, I'll tell you why I want to take up my life again in the other side of the ocean.

I've travelled around Europe, but I never been in the USA. The reason why I decided to go that far away is it's because my whole culture comes from there. I mean, I'm a photographer working in the film industry, who also loves music and all kind of fine arts, and the very many of my influences come from there (movies, music bands, artists...). In addition, I've heard that in America my work is more recognized than in Spain, where practically it is not.

I'm doubting about  wondering about/ trying to decide between Los Angeles, San Francisco and New York. Whereas California has a better weather, New York has a special lovely attractive attraction. Have you been there? Any recommendation? My intention is to start studying there in September 2015, but I should rush to start planing the journey. I am very thrill of thrilled about/ excited about it,. I'll let you know my news!

Thanks so much for your corrections and comments!

* 'but' should not begin a sentence, but should be in the middle, as in this one. This rule is sometimes broken. 

The reason is - the reason it is - here 'it' is really repeating 'reason', so the simpler one is more correct. 

Good luck with your travels. I hope it all works out very well. You seem to have very good English.