Writing a business email
Dear Mr. Junior Kelly,
I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Software Inc. Mister Mr. Kerr he will be visiting New York next week and he would like to visit an important client there, called Mr. Christopher Biggins at the Electronic Solutions company office.
He will have some free time on Wednesday (September 23rd) in the afternoon, and he is planning to visit him Mr. Biggins when he arrives. I have attached his schedule that inform detailing all of his visits duraing during his trip and also which you can use it refer to for more information and details about his itinarary.
Best Kind Regards,
Rosa Rosado, CEO
Hi Rose, I'm no good english correction, anyway I noticed: arrive/arrives duraing/during information/informations
and maybe you can avoid to use he because you specified the name of the CEO
Take my suggestions 'with doubts', I'm not a native english speaker, as I said before
Bye, have a good day
Writing a business email
Dear Mr. Junior Kelly.
I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Softwareinc Mister Kerr, he will be visiting New York next week and he would like to visit an important client there, called Christopher Biggins at the Electronic Solutions company office.
He will have some free time on Wednesday (September 23rd) in the afternoon, and he is planning to visit him when he arrive. I have attached his schedule that inform all his visits duraing his trip and also you can use it for more information and details about his itinarary.
Best Regards,
Rosa Rosado, CEO
Writing a business email
Dear Mr. Junior Kelly.
I am writing to inform you that the CEO of Future Softwareinc, Mr. Kerr, will be visiting New York next week. While there, he would like to visit an important client, Christopher Biggins, at the Electronic Solutions company office.
He will have some free time on Wednesday, September 23rd, in the afternoon. He is planning to visit when he arrives. I have attached his schedule which details all of his visits during his trip. You can refer to it for more information about his itinarary.
Best Regards,
Rosa Rosado, CEO
