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I am just learning I don't speak a work of English, so I have for this account to use online translator. But I'm going to improve and to go to their goals. I believe in myself and confident that I will achieve success.
2015年3月6日 06:29
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I JUST STARTED LEARNING ENGLISH

I don't speak a WORD of English, so I'M USING this account AS A online translator. But I'm going to improve and REACH MY GOALS. I believe in myself and confident that I will achieve success.

 

NOTES:

CAPITALS = CORRECTION

- <em>"I'm just learning english" = </em>"At the moment, I'm only learning one language, which is English"

                                            I think you want to say "I just started learning English" - "I want to                                                   learn other languages, but just English at the moment". 

 

- "<em>so I have for this account to use online translator" - </em>Although not grammatically correct, It is understandable. What you may want to say is = "I will use this account at an online translator" or "So i'm using this account as an online translator" or "Because I'm on italki.com, i will use it as an online translator"

 

- "<em>to go to their goals" - </em>I didn't understand, so I tried my best. "Their goals" = someone else's goals, not yours. Better to say = "I will reach my goals". This is very natural statement in English. 

 

Any other questions? Just ask :) Good luck

2015年3月6日
Thank you!
2015年3月10日
Welcome to italki Julia! Confidence is very good, I look forward to seeing your notepad posts. Den
2015年3月6日
もっと早く上達したいですか?
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