The first essay I am a Chinese girl, hope to know more friends, like travel, food, music, reading, shopping, of course, also like the handsome boy, ha ha. Can you be my English teacher, my pleasure

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2015年5月23日 03:49

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The My First essay Journal

I am a Chinese girl. I hope to know meet more friends, like travel, eat new food, listen to more music, reading more books, shopping more. Of course, also like the handsome boys, ha ha.
Can you be my English teacher? my pleasure It would make me happy.

(我的笔记:

我猜一点点你的翻译。你应该学英文学得多。)

2015年5月23日

Dear Kitty:really?aha, I love that

2015年5月23日

Thank you

2015年5月23日

My First Journal
I am a Chinese girl. I hope to meet more friends, like travel, eat new food, listen to more music, read some books, shop more. Of course, also like the handsome boys, ha ha.
Can you be my English teacher? my pleasure It would make me happy!

2015年5月23日

There is nothing wrong with using short sentences. " I am a Chinese girl. I hope to meet new people (though not a complete thought - maybe add "here"). I like to travel. I like food, music, reading, shopping and of course a handsome boy, ha ha"

2015年5月23日

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