Milena
My tennage years When I was fifteen and during all my teenage while was in the school I was a good student, then I didn't give trouble to my parents. I was quiet but also perfectionist in the technical drawing. I made lamins from my classmates and they pay me anything, like money or food at recess.
2015年5月27日 21:55
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My <em>teenage</em> years

When I was fifteen (and during all my teenage <em>years</em>) while was in the school I was a good student, <em>and</em> I didn't give <em>(any)</em> trouble to my parents.
I was quiet but also <em>a</em> perfectionist in the technical drawing. I made lamins <em>for</em> my classmates and they <em>paid/would pay</em> me anything, like money or food at recess.

 

Good job!!!

2015年5月28日
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My tennage  teenage years

When I was fifteen and throughout my  during all my teenage years while was in the school I was a good student. then didn't wouldn't give trouble to my parents any issues

I was quiet but also a perfectionist when it came to  in the technical drawing. I would make something called  made 'lamins' from for my classmates and they would pay me with anything. Sometimes they could give me  like money or food at during recess.

2015年5月27日
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My teenage years

When I was fifteen and during all my teenage in the school I was a good student.I didn't give any trouble to my parents.
I was reticent [who remains queit] but good in the technical drawing. I used to make lamins for my classmates and in return they gave me money or food during recess time.

2015年5月27日
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My teenage years

When I was fifteen and during (all) my teenage years while I was in the at school, I was a good student, and (then) I didn't give my parents any trouble to.*
I was quiet, but also a perfectionist in the technical drawing. I made laminates from for my classmates and they pay paid me at recess anything, like with money or food.

*we say  'I didn't give them any trouble'

2015年5月27日
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