Marcell Santos
Long time ago ..... Today I want talk a little about my life A long time ago, exactly ten years ago I was on the Navy studying to be a sailor. It was a good experience in my life. However, three years later I gratuated and I decided that was my time to got out the Navy. It was a hard decision but I was decided to go on in my dreams. I started my graduate a time later, I graduated four years later start it. Even with difficulties I got my first stage and second and I was engaged and working with I always liked: Technology. Today I´m introduced in technology´s world and I like a lot. I working like Support Analyst. If you had patience reading my text wich has a lot of mystakes until here please correct my entry and have a nice day. haha Regards
2015年5月28日 00:16
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Long time ago .....

Today I want talk a little about my life

A long time ago, exactly ten years ago I was on in the Navy studying to be a sailor. It was a good experience in my life. However, three years later I gratuated graduated and I decided that it was my time to got get out of the Navy. It was a hard decision but I was had decided to go on in with my dreams. I started my graduate a time later A little ago I had started my graduate program and 4 years later I graduatedI graduated four years later start it . Even with difficulties I got my first stage and second and I was engaged and working with what I've always liked: Technology.

Today I´m introduced in the world of tecnology technology´s world and I like it a lot. I I'm working like as a Support Analyst. (I'm not entirely sure what you were wanting to say here.)

If you had patience reading my text wich has a lot of mystakes until here please correct my entry and have a nice day. haha

Regards

 

(I would have to say that you've had very minor mistakes.)

2015年5月28日

Long time ago .....

Today I want to talk a little bit about my life

A long time ago (exactly ten years ago), I was in the Navy studying to be a sailor. It was a good experience in my life. However, three years later, I graduated and I decided that it was my time to get out of the Navy. It was a hard decision, but I was decided to go on in follow my dreams. I started my graduate a time later, (?) I graduated four years later after starting it. Even with difficulties, I got my first stage and second (?) and I was engaged and working with what I always liked: Technology.

Today, I'm into technology and I like it a lot. I work as a Support Analyst.

If you had patience reading my text which has a lot of mistakes up to this point, please correct my entry and have a nice day. haha

Regards

 

 

 

Sorry I couldn't correct some things!! Difficulty understanding/articulating on my part
Have a nice night !! :) Lol 

2015年5月28日
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