I'm learning English

i come from China, Beijing = I am from Beijing, China. I came from Beijing, China. I live in Beijing, China.

.my name is Lushan. = My name is Lushan. I go by Lushan. I'm known as Lushan.

i 'm learning English ,I hope I can make some foreign friends all around the world. = I'm learning English and I hope I can make some foreign friends from all around/over the world.

Hello, my name is Lushan and I am from Beijing, China. I'm learning English and I hope to make friends from all over the world! = This is a really natural english sentence^^

Good luck and keep up the good work!

I'm learning English

I am from China, Beijing .my name is Lushan.I 'm learning English ,I hope to make some foreign friends all around the world.

great...well done

I'm learning English

i come from Beijing, China. My name is Lushan. I'm learning English and I hope I can make some foreign friends all around the world.

写英文的时候要注意大写小写。