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Hello again! I was very busy and I couldn't write anything. However, this is my firt day of holidays. I will try to write sometimes. I learnt a lot the last summer with your corrections and my writing improved. Thanks! Moreover, I have enough free time to correct Spanish writings to help Spanish learners.
2015年7月1日 15:32
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Hello Again!

I was very busy and I couldn't write anything. However, this is my first day of holidays. I will try to write sometimes. I learnt a lot the last summer with your corrections and my writing improved. Thanks! Moreover, I have enough free time to correct Spanish writings to help Spanish learners.

2015年7月1日

Great posting!  I have made some suggestions below.  I hope they are useful to you.

Enjoy your holidays :)

 

However, this is <em>the first day of my holidays.</em>

I will try to write <em>every now and then</em>.

I learnt a lot the last summer with your corrections and my writing improved.

 

2015年7月1日
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