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This scene shows a new side of Ben while the mise-en-scene elements are both introducing how he starts to take the initiative from his peer, Elaine. Moreover, it not only drives the plot forward, but also in particular indicates a turning point in the film's broader plot. The first half of the film is that Mrs. Robinson is holding the power which contrasts to this scene. Ben is nervous or even in a panic when they are having an abnormal relationship. However, the bad date scene implies a turning point that makes Ben become a more powerful character which has initiative in the second part of the film. The elements demonstrate Ben's character trait development from powerlessness to initiative, this allows audiences to observe the growth of Ben. For instance, Ben decides to win Elaine back after she returns to her school later in the film, he chases Elaine from the school to the church. This is the initiative that Ben developed after this date. This scene may also be the initial motivation for Ben to take actions and fight for his goal which is Elaine. As a result, this part acts as a connection of the film as a whole while the growth of Ben allows audiences to focus on the transition of position between Ben, Mrs. Robinson and Elaine, and Ben's character transformation as a graduate can drive the plot development between he and Elaine. To sum up, this scene emphasizes a turning point of Ben that he lacks initiative at the beginning of the film and he finally has the initiative at the end. This is thanks to the elements' contribution to the growth of the character and the plot development. This scene can also relate to the previous scene that Mrs. Robinson seduces Ben where Ben is in Mrs. Robinson’s house so that she can take the initiative and this setting and the behaviors of Mrs. Robinson stress the panic of Ben in that scene. Thus, the initiative of a character is significance to the plot development.

To analyze the sound element, Ben is the one who always creates loud sound in this scene, such as he drives imprudently and sounds the horn that make noisy ambient sound and he brings Elaine to a strip club with loud music and voices. Thus, Elaine needs to speak loudly or in high notes so that Ben and audiences can hear her dialogue clearly. In addition, when she feels bad about what Ben had done to her, she cries silently. In contrast, Ben is in a driving position such as he closes the car roof which offers a silence zone for them to have a meal and chat. This reveals that Ben starts to gain the initiative when compared with Elaine and the contradistinction between them displays obviously. Hence, this allows audiences to understand their position through the presentation of synchronous sounds (the dialogue, the music and the sound effects) that mentioned above. In this scene, besides the setting of the street, other settings are either inside Ben's car or in the place that is chosen by Ben. Ben keeps reinforcing his initiative that the settings provide the advantages for him as he could drive to anywhere he likes and he is more familiar with the environment (the strip club) than Elaine. Therefore, he is more comfortable and confident when gets along with Elaine whereas she feels uncomfortable when they enters that club, a dialogue she said "Where is the car?" shows the helplessness of her, thereby emphasizing the distinct sentiments between them like the first encounter of Ben and Mrs. Robinson at Mrs. Robinson's house.

How this scene represents a turning point in the film as it emphasises Ben as taking the initiative compared to Elaine and how this initiative is important for Ben’s character development in the film as a whole. The film The Graduate is a comedy-drama about Ben, a recent graduate with no well-defined goal in life, who is seduced by his parents' friend, Mrs. Robinson, and then proceeds to fall in love with her daughter, Elaine. There is a scene where Ben tries to sabotage his first date with Elaine by driving incautiously ignoring her and forcing her to tears, but he finds himself falling in love with her. The characters' behaviors, the sound and the setting are used to represent a turning point in the film and drive the plot forward by emphasizing Ben's development of initiative. The significance of the elements allows audiences to be more aware of Ben's growth as a fresh graduate throughout the entire film. The behaviors of Ben and Elaine are much different in this scene as Ben keeps ignoring Elaine and just walking towards the strip club after they get off the car, but Elaine can only follow where Ben goes. Ben kisses Elaine first as she leaves the club and cries badly. Also, Ben is the one who suggests not to enter Elaine's home instead of finding somewhere to have a drink. These actions show that Ben is taking the initiative and playing a leading role when he is with Elaine. Their behaviors indicate Ben keeps directing Elaine, a passive role to do what he desires. This scene allows audiences to notice the growth of Ben's character trait as he starts to control his own path as well as emphasizes how Ben changes to be an active person via his interaction with Elaine and ignorance the promise with Mrs. Robinson.