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The days that I'm spending in my hometown I have gone back to my home for several days. My feeling is the same as that of last holiday. In addition to confront with some problems of my major, I'll finish a social practical activity. For fear that my extra exam, I can hardly go out for entertainment. My grade is not as good as I expected. But after all, it is better than that of my first session in college. I understand that keeping a good condition of body is so important for a adult. No single principle can solve the problems exist in human life, so I'm used to learning knowledge instead of idling away so that I can catch up this world which are running and updating at rapid speed.
2015年7月27日 17:47
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The days that I'm spending in my hometown

I have gone back I've been back at home for several days now. My feeling is the same as that of the last holiday I've spent here. In addition to confront with some problems of my major, I'll finish a social practical activity. For fear that of my extra exam, I can hardly go out for entertainment. My grade is not as good as I expected. But after all, it is better than that of my first session in college. I understand that keeping a good condition of body maintaining a healthy physique is so also important for an adult. No single principle can solve the all problems existing in human life humanity, so I'm used to learning knowledge instead of idling away so that I can catch up with this world, which is running and updating at a rapid speed.

2015年7月27日
Thanks for your help. From the correction of my essay, I found some potential problems exposing in my learning of Enlish writing.
2015年7月28日
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