Jessica
I like to go running every morning ... I like to go running every morning because it makes me feel relaxed but one morning accidentally I broke my leg so I went to the hospital , now I'm fine and I still go running every morning because I love it .
2015年8月2日 05:32
訂正 · 1

Your English is fine, so I'm just going to suggest some more punctuation:

 

 

I like to go running every morning ...

I like to go running every morning, because it makes me feel relaxed. but One morning, however,  accidentally I accidently broke my leg, so I went to the hospital. Now I'm fine and I still go running every morning, because I love it .

2015年8月2日
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