So, I'm going to weite down my introduction .
My name is saki .
Please feel free to call me saki.
I'm a high school student and second grade .
I'm good at reading English ,but not good at writing and speaking English.
I want to speak English fluently .
I don't know what to write here.
Anyway, if you can be my language partner ,tell me please.
I will keep diary everyday here.
Please correct this sentences.
1st day
Today I started began using italki . (not wrong per-say, but sound much more natural in a way I rephrased it)So, I'm going to write down my introduction . So, I would like to write an introduction. (makes more sense with 'so' in the beginning)
My name is Saki .
Please feel free to call me Saki.
I'm a high school student and a second-grader . (technically correct, but more naturally 'in a second grade')
I'm good at reading English , but I am bad good at writing and speaking English. (making coma straight after a word is a nitpick, you do this mistake consistently; second part was technically correct, but I changed it so it sounds better from the style perspective, removing unnecessary repetitions)
I want to speak English fluently .(could make this one better by writing something like 'want to become able to')
I don't know what to write about here.
Anyway, if you can want to be my language partner , tell me please. (need to use proper modal verbs here, it is more natural in this situation to tell if somebody has a wish to help rather than just being 'physically' able to help)
I will keep a diary everyday here. (diary is kept for some time continuously, but you can write that you will write diary entries everyday)
Please correct this sentences.
